Smashing-Flash's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Monotonia]

No shit!

I can tell you really put a lot of effort in it!
Kudos for that mate!
Could you make the next one in colors?

sticktale responds:

I did look back at the end and think about colours, but I made it to be watched like this, in black and white, so I think ading colours would have ruined it a little. I don't think I'll do another one of these... then again...

[Mario & sonic 1]

Uh oh

I'm sorry but to me this is to similar to Alwin-Earthworms work.
The preloader, the whole idea is just not original imo.

Kaji04 responds:

what ? similar.... maybe a little but i dont wanted to copy him... i used mario sonic because they are the primary characters and luigi and shadow for being the secondary >_>..... okay?

[Supa Mario Brudas.]

Why no sound?

I would appreciate sound more than a pre-loader really

marink227 responds:

because i didnt no how to put sound in then, and now my trial period of Adobe Flash is up......

[Eternal clash: episode 1]

Got potential

But needs more keyframes, looks a bit choppy as for now.
Look forward to ep 2 :)

eternalclash responds:

okey dokey!

[Battles; DBZ part 1]

It was ok

Two tips for you, one is a two-in-one.
1. Work on your animation, maybe more keyframes.
And use some asing to make it less "jumpy".
2. Have a music loop that is twice as long so we don't hear that it starts over, especially since this is so short.

ChrisDH responds:

ok i get you loop the music that you very much for the advice

thank you for watching

ChrisDH

[Bye-Bye, Bulby]

I do have flash experience

But in areas that doesn't fit on NG (namely websites and banner ads).
However, I wasn't going to be critical.
I was about to tell you that you have reasons to be happy with it.
You used some nice techniques that proves that you are a real animator.
And I can see that you are a good photoshopper (no sprites).
There is only one thing that hold back the 10. The "swosh" effect should be different. Its a bit boring when its the same sound (like the wilhelm scream).

So, no need to be defensive ;)
Cheers :)

JoyPig1990 responds:

Thanks a lot! It's great to recieve praise from someone who knows what they are talking about.

[Cog of Man]

I love it

Very well animated.
Great use of music and audio FX.
And very deep!
Great work mate!

PropagandaClock responds:

*blush*
You can stalk my bedroom window anyday

[FTW! Showcase 2]

Hey!

Give me back my cat :D

XxwaSSupxX responds:

Sorry... My cat musta ate your cat...
It'll turn up :D

[Gears Of Madness Act 1-1]

This was crap

Utterly crap.
It was so bad I'm not even going to bother to tell you what you did wrong or what you could have improved. Start all over again and forget you ever made this flash.
And move on.

Cooliam responds:

shut up.

[Long Ass Stick Fight]

Plenty to fix

1. Don't make it long ass, but short and good.
2. Some kind of story, or reason for why they are killin each other, if not then you don't have an ending either.
3. Sync the sound.
4. Less blood. Blood doesn't mean "awh, awesome. Lots of action!", but boring and unnecessary.
5. Don't make things appear nor disappear from nowhere.
6. This should probably be number one. Ask someone else you know of what you need to fix before you post it. Don't come here asking for it afterwards to get mercy because you were humble enough to ask us what needs to be fixed. If you make a feature film, you don't ask the audience in the cinema "well, this is the final movie. Tell me what's wrong with it"!

LazyMuffin responds:

Oh come on! I made this when I was 12 or something!