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[Awesome Gaiden]

Great!

Funny as hell, and yet so painfully true...

[A Lack of Color]

Great for a first flash!

Keep it coming mate!

[Monotonia]

No shit!

I can tell you really put a lot of effort in it!
Kudos for that mate!
Could you make the next one in colors?

sticktale responds:

I did look back at the end and think about colours, but I made it to be watched like this, in black and white, so I think ading colours would have ruined it a little. I don't think I'll do another one of these... then again...

[Mario & sonic 1]

Uh oh

I'm sorry but to me this is to similar to Alwin-Earthworms work.
The preloader, the whole idea is just not original imo.

Kaji04 responds:

what ? similar.... maybe a little but i dont wanted to copy him... i used mario sonic because they are the primary characters and luigi and shadow for being the secondary >_>..... okay?

[Supa Mario Brudas.]

Why no sound?

I would appreciate sound more than a pre-loader really

marink227 responds:

because i didnt no how to put sound in then, and now my trial period of Adobe Flash is up......

[Eternal clash: episode 1]

Got potential

But needs more keyframes, looks a bit choppy as for now.
Look forward to ep 2 :)

eternalclash responds:

okey dokey!

[Super Mario Bros.]

No offense

I know this is your first flash, but it needs a lot more work.
Not only the design, but you need to work more on the animation itself.
Remember to put audio in your second flash ;)

[Battles; DBZ part 1]

It was ok

Two tips for you, one is a two-in-one.
1. Work on your animation, maybe more keyframes.
And use some asing to make it less "jumpy".
2. Have a music loop that is twice as long so we don't hear that it starts over, especially since this is so short.

ChrisDH responds:

ok i get you loop the music that you very much for the advice

thank you for watching

ChrisDH

[Mario P0wn]

Lmao

You gotta be one crazy bastard to come up with this!
Loved the song!
Loved the animation!
I'l give you 5/5 and 10/10!

Cheers ;)

[Bye-Bye, Bulby]

I do have flash experience

But in areas that doesn't fit on NG (namely websites and banner ads).
However, I wasn't going to be critical.
I was about to tell you that you have reasons to be happy with it.
You used some nice techniques that proves that you are a real animator.
And I can see that you are a good photoshopper (no sprites).
There is only one thing that hold back the 10. The "swosh" effect should be different. Its a bit boring when its the same sound (like the wilhelm scream).

So, no need to be defensive ;)
Cheers :)

JoyPig1990 responds:

Thanks a lot! It's great to recieve praise from someone who knows what they are talking about.