Funny as hell, and yet so painfully true...
Great for a first flash!
Keep it coming mate!
I can tell you really put a lot of effort in it!
Kudos for that mate!
Could you make the next one in colors?
I did look back at the end and think about colours, but I made it to be watched like this, in black and white, so I think ading colours would have ruined it a little. I don't think I'll do another one of these... then again...
I'm sorry but to me this is to similar to Alwin-Earthworms work.
The preloader, the whole idea is just not original imo.
what ? similar.... maybe a little but i dont wanted to copy him... i used mario sonic because they are the primary characters and luigi and shadow for being the secondary >_>..... okay?
Why no sound?
I would appreciate sound more than a pre-loader really
because i didnt no how to put sound in then, and now my trial period of Adobe Flash is up......
But needs more keyframes, looks a bit choppy as for now.
Look forward to ep 2 :)
I know this is your first flash, but it needs a lot more work.
Not only the design, but you need to work more on the animation itself.
Remember to put audio in your second flash ;)
It was ok
Two tips for you, one is a two-in-one.
1. Work on your animation, maybe more keyframes.
And use some asing to make it less "jumpy".
2. Have a music loop that is twice as long so we don't hear that it starts over, especially since this is so short.
ok i get you loop the music that you very much for the advice
thank you for watching
You gotta be one crazy bastard to come up with this!
Loved the song!
Loved the animation!
I'l give you 5/5 and 10/10!
I do have flash experience
But in areas that doesn't fit on NG (namely websites and banner ads).
However, I wasn't going to be critical.
I was about to tell you that you have reasons to be happy with it.
You used some nice techniques that proves that you are a real animator.
And I can see that you are a good photoshopper (no sprites).
There is only one thing that hold back the 10. The "swosh" effect should be different. Its a bit boring when its the same sound (like the wilhelm scream).
So, no need to be defensive ;)
Thanks a lot! It's great to recieve praise from someone who knows what they are talking about.
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